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MY essay please help with the proof reading

Here is the essay much appreciated if you can give me grammatical help as well as giving it a title. Oh and please give me comments too :) Either here or on yahoo answers :http://sg.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20110624013743AAFixb9

Victorine stood in the penthouse of “The Genetics Company” staring out into the night lost in her own thoughts. A knock on the door jolted her back to reality. “Come in”. She called out without even bothering to turn around. A boy probably seventeen or eighteen years old stood quietly beside her. Victorine had forgotten about Nathan.

If people had not known any better, they would have thought that Victorine and Nathan was a couple. Although Nathan was already twenty, he had a very boyish face; making him look very much younger .Victorine on the other hand had a rather mature look than her actual age of thirteen. She looked jaded and tired

Her name was Victorine Shayna Franklin. She was the epitome of perfection; to many people she was both beautiful and intelligent. She was much more than intelligent. In fact she was a genius. She had a string of academic qualifications from the top Ivy League universities. She graduated magna cum laude in all. She was young.

That was the year 2105 and many things which were thought impossible had thus far been achieved. One such achievement would was genetic selection. Many parents would go for genetic selection to make sure that their child would receive only the desired traits from either of the parents instead of “allowing nature to take its course”. However scientists have yet to be able to control or manipulate the intelligence of the child. It was common to find people walking down the street with supermodel looks but the intelligence of a normal human being.

Victorine and Nathan had met when they were both studying for their Masters in medicine. They were instantaneously drawn to each other and became the best of friends despite the huge age gap. Both of them were interested in anything which had to do with genetics particularly in genetic testing, genetic testing especially Victorine.

She decided to specialize in genetic testing. Why was that so? When Victorine was only six years old she had had to witness her aunt’s emotional and fragile state go downhill rapidly. Victorine’s parents were constantly overseas for they often had to attend conferences abroad as they too were famous geneticists. Her aunt decided that it was unacceptable to leave a little girl alone and offered to look after Victorine when her parents were away. Victorine’s parents were ever so thankful they offered Victorine’s aunt free genetic testing. For a great number of years she refused. That was until Victorine turned six; her aunt decided to take the test. The prognosis of the tests revealed that she was prone to Hodgkin’s Lymphoma, a type of Lymphoma, which is cancer originating from the white blood cells.

The formally cheerful woman’s attitude towards life changed in a matter of a few weeks. She acted as though she was the only person on earth who was prone to Hodgkin’s Lymphoma; she moped about the house as she sank deeper and deeper into depression. That eventually led to suicide. Who else but Victorine should be the first to find out that she had committed suicide? Victorine had seen her aunt sprawled on the bed motionless. Although Victorine was only six years old she could understand what had happened. She was able to sympathise with her aunt better than anyone else could. That day as she saw her aunt lying on her death bed, very literally, she swore to herself that as long as it was within her power, she would not allow anyone to suffer as much as her aunt had.

“Want to know something interesting?” Victorine looked at Nathan who just shrugged. She continued on, “well, today as I was walking through the office in Fyshwick, I saw a woman who looked exactly like my aunt. I could not even begin to describe how uncanny it was. You do remember my aunt right? May god bless her soul.” Victorine paused for a moment as a sign of respect before continuing “you know it felt as though someone were trying to tell me something. The rumours about the staff being slipshod and uncaring really do not help. ” Nathan looked at her as a sign for her to continue. Despite Victorine’s monotonic voice Nathan could tell that Victorine was a jumble of emotions. Nathan knew all about the incident which had happened approximately seven years ago. Victorine herself had told him exactly what happened. He sympathised with Victorine. Now Nathan was not only Victorine’s best friend but also business partner. They had set up their company “The Genetics Company” only two years ago and already it was flourishing. With over fifty offices across the country and another few hundred abroad, their main office situated in Canberra, Australia.

Victorine stared blankly into space deep in thought. She suddenly asked “What do you see?” Once again Nathan just shrugged allowing Victorine to continue. “Many people will say that they see the beautiful city of Canberra, but what do I see? I see hundreds maybe even thousands of medical facilities situated in just one city. Too many? On the contrary, there is a shortage of good hospices, good institutions all over the country. Why? Genetic tests that’s why,” Victorine spoke in a slightly agitated tone. Nathan did not need any further explanation from Victorine to know what she was getting at. She then walked out of her office with Nathan following behind.

Even before they walked past, the employees had already stood up ready to bow and greet them. Young as she was Victorine demanded respect and acknowledgement that she was the boss Victorine immediately walked towards the announcement room with Nathan following closely behind. She whispered to Nathan as to tell him what to say over the speakers. “Attention all, we shall be conducting a mass evaluation of all our facilities. All directors please report to meeting room three immediately. All people in charge of the overseas offices please inform them too.”

In just a matter of just minutes e-mails were sent to every office all over to globe. Directors from different sectors of the company and cities, either in persons or via video conferencing, were in the meeting room in a matter of minutes. As soon as they were all seated Victorine stood up. “The reason I have asked all of you to come here today is to conduct an immediate employee evaluation” Victorine paused for a moment to allow them to digest her words. “I decided that I shall personally evaluate the main office. I also want all of the Directors and country managers to evaluate all their sub-units and report to me personally. I shall not tolerate any incompetency. They will be fired on spot if I find any incompetency. Oh and I will be starting from the rank and file of the company” With that, she walked out of the meeting room with Nathan following. As predicted by Nathan the first place Victorine went was the psychiatric sector of the building.

The waiting room of the psychiatric sector was entirely white. It was very packed and the noise was unbearable .Many of the patients were screaming, moaning or walking around aimlessly talking to themselves. Many of them had that dazed and glazed looks. Victorine immediately walked out of the room and went to the doctors’ offices instead. Many of the psychiatrists’ did not notice Victorine as they were busy talking and socialising with each other with. Only a handful was paying attention to their patients. Victorine was astounded by the scene. Muttering to herself she stalked off in a huff once again with Nathan in tail. Abruptly she stopped walking and turned around, Nathan accidently knocking into her in the process. Although feeling frustrated Victorine very calmly picked herself up. “Never mind that, the behaviour of the staff is unacceptable. They need to do their job and not talk. A board meeting should be called immediately.” Nathan nodded his head in agreement. “And you will chair the meeting,” her tone was final leaving no room for argument. Plugging in her ear phones Victorine turned on her heels and marched out of the building.

Nodding to the rhythm of the music Victorine tried to think of a solution to end all the “madness” but no matter how hard she thought it just would not come to her. An ear piercing scream could be heard in the distance. Victorine turned to where the sound of the scream was coming from and saw a middle aged women standing at the side with her mouth agape pointing at the space above Victorine’s head. Victorine tilted her head to see what she was pointing at. Just then, something struck her, at that very moment, she had this brilliant idea in her mind ...a solution to end all the catastrophic effects of Genetic testing. At that moment Victorine slipped into abysmal of darkness. Darkness ........nothing but darkness all around..........

Okay so I JUST realized my blog is pretty much dead

Anyway I the reason for my dead blog is

1) I'm too lazy to blog

2) I hate the name

3) I have created a new blog

4) I don't have time

OK so pick any one I will be posting the link of my new blog when I create one if I do that is XD hahaha I know i'm so awesome bye peeps

My blog is not dead XD

Despite what you say woman! My blog is NOT dead >.< Okay anyway I decided to blog today cause I felt like writing really I did more than typing which is super surprising for me XP haha anyway did any of you follow my tumblr? Reasons to follow:

1. It is way more profound than this blog

2. Although I said that continue to read this blog!

3. I post more once again continue to read this blog

Ok anyway the GEs are here for people from Singapore tuthfully I don't really care cause I duneed to vote YET. XD yay I guess? O.O i was using my tumblr for about 2hrs before coming on to blogger I guess that gives you an idea of how addicted I am to tumblr now? reason as to

why I haven't blogged for so long: simply because I have no time haha I am such a liar... Just cause I'm lazy I know I'm an awesome blogger who get 1000+ views each day right???? hahaha bullshit XP anyway I dunno why I'm so crude today >.< do you like Justin Beiber? I'm bored... although I have super alot of hw... blech I hate homework and everytime I type blech it auto corrects to belch freaking irritating XP lemme think... I think l0tsa my seniors dun like me DX that sux hai.. I hope that it's just my thinking and it's not true... Oh anyone wanna teach me how to do html freaking annoying >.< yay my grandma is coming over to

day XD me=

happy XDXDXDXD umm nothing to blog bout so... oh yah and now I'm gonna take advantage and bitch about life... type of people I hate:

1. people who pity themselves

2. People who copy you and then pretend they did not and go around telling people that they came up with the idea or whatever first

3. backstabbers

4. hypocrites ( including me thus I dislike myself)

5. People who are dislike No. 2 people but are no.2 people

6. People who bitch about other people although they are like people in NO.2 but instead the go around telling people all about that idea as though they know EVERYTHING about it

7. People who complicate things

8. Bitches (although some are ok like myself XD see I admit I'm a bitch)

Haiz I'm so mean/ crude but thats life anyway next is the kpop sorta post read if you want if not shoo go away

KPOP sorta post

well for one my bias changed back to KEY XDXDXD hahaha I think I'm losing my mind... anyway about an hour ago sucked my sis was watching music bank LIVE

and for some strange reason I thought that using the computer was more fun dunno whats wrong with me... Anyway anyone likes coed? I quite like them and their songs XD they are under them same company as T-ara pics below XD

Oh btw they are one of the few mix groups in the KPOP scene.

Another girl group brave girls

awesome shit! Their vocals are A+ and pretty too XD Oh their album cover below XD

Oh have you listened to F(x)'s Danger yet? awesome XD love it trying to learn the dance XD hahaha but epic fails so far here's the link. AWESOME XD hahaha anyway I love GD and TOP's high high super duper awesome link I also love the song somebody to love by big bang hehehe link here for practice vid trying to learn the dance too XD oh and my response to high high is: like ninja XD go watch the video and you'll know why hahaha all other songs by big bang, top and GD are awesome and the song by brave girls is awesome too XDXDXDXD link here l0l dun feel like blogging any more so bye...

Hehe I'm finally posting XD

Okie it's been a while but excuse me for trying to study XD LOL anyway I love and hate this week hehe before that I have a new bias hehe guess who?

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*Ding* It's kikwang from B2ST

LOL Isn't he cute???? Haha anyway back to my week I did not have any dance at all which is kinda sad I received my results even sadder... Had a stupiak compre quiz to day

I am soooooo ganna fail!!!! In depression now... Having shitty 2.4 tomorrow anything worse than depression? O.O Anyway the sorta happy thing is that there's no school on Friday!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehehehe happy as shit!!!!! Ya know i should really study harder instead

of playing with my phone all the time...This is really really really strange but i sometime

s wish for my phone to be taken away am I weird or what??? Haha anyway the other good thing is I found Kikwang!!!!! haha and that I went to comics connection but did not find anything I liked ok back to depression... Anyway today sucked I did REALLY badly for my chinese and FPS!!!!! haiz... LOL I love dance XD random I know... Haiz gonna try to run 2.4 haha lol see if I even step out of the house first cause usally I will back out half way hahaha I so unique right? LOL That's me for you XD hehe gonna update/ totally change my page... Be sure to see XD hehe one more reminder click HERE

LOL anyway should I KPOP update fine I will...

KPOP XD

Ok you guys should know there was this thing about the model Kim Yuri commiting suicide? well apparently she did not so... How did she die? well I have no Idea but they are investigating it may she rest in peace.

Hehe yup Park Bom from 2NE1 has a new single XD Here it is XD

Hehe this is random but soooooo cute they are lil' Big Bang guess who's who? Oh BTW they are with Minzy my fave from 2NE1!!!! <3<3

Lol lazy to blog more so bai... Oh click on THIS!!!

I'm awesomer than you

Hey people XD

I'm blogging today again haha played com the whole day after I came home from dance <3 LOL I'm such a slacker but I will study tomorrow O.o anyway I have just recently joined tumblr it is called a box full of kisses <3 so romantic right???? Oh and profound too of course XDXDXDXDXD follow me XD and I'll love you XD JKJKJKJKJKJK haha anyway Yu Bin's tumblr

is eat.pray.dance feel free to follow if you have tumblr <3 haha love my tumblr <3 as much as my blog but would love it more if there were more people following me :'( get the hint? Haha anyway school was sorta awesome today dance not that awesome though :'( anyway my post yesterday was freaking em... -.-" so embaressed now... Anyway I really really really really really really really want a DSLR now!!!!!!! PLEASE buy for me? *innocent, pleading look* Anyway this is my third time posting two days in a row XDXDXDXDXDXD so happy because of that XD yup the little things in life make me happy hahahaha can use that in tumblr!!!!! LOL I am totally

obsessing over it... Anyway FOLLOW ME!!!!! LOL down to business stupiak Yu Bin is not posting again and therefore deserves a scolding >.< haha anyway I LOVE key!!!!!!!!!! KEY=

KIBUM = HOT STUFF!!!!!

Hahaha got to go now bye bye XDXDXDXD TUMBLR!!!!!

FML!!!!!

The sad part you can choose to read or not (can also be called emo part)

OKay as you are able to see from my title today basically sucked althought I probably use fml for

a good 50% of my life anyway I shall not mention any names in this post instead I shall use fake names XP okay whatever lah anyway toeday started out as any normal day would with me going

to school and such and then Recess came but I did not go down just cause needed to to do some NE thingy anyway, after recess stupid Jane suddenly disappeared so I was sorta alone and Samantha was acting all wierd... Kinda irritating if you ask me and during LA I tried to talk to everyone but surprise surprise stupiak Mary ignored me after Felicia left -.-" ok not really ignore but act like really weird around me... Whatever lah and the horrible thing is that Samantha kept sticking and I think only ah but... that Samantha really wants to go with Mary

o.O I thought she was supposed to be with me -.-"""""" Anyway for LA at least she was kinda a backstabber T.T damn sad xia.... And then you know it seems like Cassidy doesn't really like me but pretends to but... Hai... And I think that Lisa does not really like me too but -.-" hai you may or may not know that I always say that I don't care if people don't like me but truth to be told I

sometime do especially if I really like that person... It really makes me feel like T.T.

Anyway time for the HAPPY part I took the two photos below tell me nice not???? artistic not????

Yup I LOVE my markers <3

Okay lah anyway how do you find Yu bin's blogging so far? (personally I find it kinda boring) (yes again I know that you are reading this Yu Bin) Anyway good new is I think... my fringe has grown a little so it kinda irritates my eyes ok so maybe not very good but whatever XD another unglam picture of my self so brace yourselves XD Okay nvm forget it... Anyway the strange thing today is that I opened my fridge and guess what I saw?

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Yup!!!!!!!!!!! I saw lipgloss/balm or whatever you call it guess who put it there??? Yup my crazy little sister she has officially lost her marbles -.-" No I did not put it in my fridge just to make it look interesting it really did happen!!!!

KPOP time <3

Hahahaha have you heard of Rania? Well it's a girl group and all of them are super hot in my opinion no I'm not lesbian or am I...?

Anyway here is the link to their new song me likey XD not not the video the song!!! But actually their dance moves are super difficult... -.-" Oh and they just debuted on Mnet charts I think... Anyway another girl singer I like is Kim Greem I LOVE <3 her voice super powerful!!!! somemore still she quite pretty leh!!! Here is the link to one of her music vids XD No photo simply cause I'm too lazy hehe... Anyway I think I'm in love with the song bad girl maybe not in love I just like it... link here XD And I LOVE the song JoJo too by shinee only that this is more than like hovering between the both link here XD haha today I have like a million links and one photo well... lazy mah... Ok lah one photo of T-ara

I just love the pic somemore got bling bling one leh anyway did you listen to the song Time To Love quite old but I still love it!!! Link here <3

I think you guys should know but CN blue top has dropped to the 4th position :'( of the Mnet chart 오빠파이팅 (Haha I love you google translate!!!!!!!) Anyway did you guys listen to twinkle twinkle by Girl's day? Go listen!!!! I love it dunno bout you though currently 7th I think O.o on the Mnet charts. Link here Haha yah I know another link but I can't help it anyway I shall end of with a quote...( make myself seem smarter)

"Never Play With The Feelings Of Others

Because You May Win The Game
But The Risk Is That You Will Surely Lose
The Person For A Life Time".

-Shakespear

Am I smart or what??? Anyway bye for now XD